高考英语作文的写作技巧
一：开头
句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.
二：经过
2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引导的短语。如:
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分词短语。如:
Satisfied with the result，He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒装句。如:
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
⑤省略句。如: If so，victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。
4.学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。
②转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。
③总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(最后)等。
④强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。 相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 结尾
1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)
2、 Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
高考英语作文让句型升级的技巧
定语从句 要想写出定语从句，首先要保证两个简单句有重复词汇，再将含有重复词汇的两个简单句合成定语从句。
1. 合并法
【使用条件】写作要点中有重复词汇
【例1】假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。
英语演讲比赛
主题：人与自然
时间：6月15日下午2：00～5：00
地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生
联系人：李华(电话：44876655)
欢迎大家光临
【分析】首先阅读题干，题干中没有直接出现重复词汇，但是稍加分析不难发现，在描述主题时，肯定会多次出现“演讲比赛”。比如：“我校将举办一场演讲比赛，演讲比赛的主题是人与自然，演讲比赛在什么时间什么地点举行”。除此之外，“主题：人与自然”这个要点与“参赛选手：10名学生”也可以说成“演讲比赛的主题是人与自然，10名学生将讨论这个主题”。只要确定写作要点中可以出现两个含有重复词汇的句子，我们就能通过三个步骤写出定语从句。
【步骤】第一步：把两个句子翻译成英语简单句，并标出重复词汇。以我们刚刚分析过的要点为例：
① The topic of this contest is “Man and Nature”.
②Ten students will talk about “Man and Nature”.
第二步：确定主句和从句，将从句的重复词汇用对应关系词替换并提至从句句首。在确定主句和从句时，考生只需要根据中文构思判断合成后的句子主要想表达哪个要点，含有该要点的句子就是主句。在用对应关系词替换时，考生看到重复词汇指物时用关系代词which / that来替换，指人时用关系代词who / that来替换，指时间时用关系副词when来替换。按照这个步骤和前面分析部分的构思，句子①为我们主要想表达的内容，那么句子②即为从句，将从句中的重复词汇“Man and Nature”用对应关系词which替换后变为：
③which ten students will talk about
第三步：将替换后的从句作为整体置于主句重复词汇后面。按照该步骤，将句子③置于句子①的重复词汇后变为：
④The topic of this contest is“Man and Nature”，which ten students will talk about.
这样，一个完整的定语从句就写出来了。 高考英语作文写作常用的高级句型
1) 主语+ cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.(再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)例如：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
2)There is no need for sb to do sth.\ for sth.(某人没有必要做……)，例如：There is no need for you to bring more food. 不需你拿来更多的食物了。
3)By +doing…，主语can …. (借着……，……能够……)，例如：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
4) … enable + sb.+ to + do…. (……使……能够……)，例如：Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 5) On no account can we + do…. (我们绝对不能……)，例如：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
6) What will happen to sb.? (某人将会怎样?), 例如：What will happen to the orphan? 那个孤儿将会怎样?
7)For the past + 时间，主语 + 现在完成式…. (过去……年来，……一直……)例如： For the past two years，I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
8)It pays to + do….(……是值得的。)例如：It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。
9)主语+ be based on….(以……为基础)，例如：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
10)主语 + do one’s best to do….(尽全力去……)，例如：We should do our best to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标
注意：“尽全力”在英语中有不同表达，例如：We should spare no effort/make every effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 |